See Me Free

(verse one)
Wishing i had the courage to make a stand, 
i know if i just try i can plan- for you to see me, in this new light where i am free! (chorus)
im breaking out, im making new,
letting go of the stress i fell into.
nothings gonna stop me now,
i found the way- i know how
to be true to me
you can see now- i am free
(verse two)
no more lies, and no more tears,
take away my sins and erase all my fears.
its time to let my light shine,
take control of this life i call mine!
(chorus)
(verse three)
now that i know that i am free
im starting to see the real me.
im done pretending and playing games
its time for me to put out the flames.
cause God is great, and God is good,
i beat the trials i have stood- in the light of Jesus Christ, where everything shines, and all is right. and now that i can see, i know now, i am free. 
(end)


So this is my first Christian song, and I kinda like it :) What do you think?

The World (To Me)

The World (To Me)
(girl)
I don't know what to say.
For us it's just this way.
I'm lookin' at stars,
Wondering where you are.
You never seemed, like type to leave.
Without even sayin goodbye.
Now if I told you, you wouldn't believe,
But, I'll write it out in the sky.
'Come home, where my love flows free,
Cause' darlin, you mean the world to me.'
(guy)
I don't know how I got here.
On the edge of the ocean.
Sometimes you seem to appear,
But I know you never got the notion.
That I just want you in my arms, every single day.
We're so far apart now,
I'll never get the chance to say
"Will you run away with me?
We can leave this town behind."
No one said we couldnt be free.
But fate has been so unkind.
Now, if  I told you, you wouldn't believe,
So, I'll write it out in the sky.
"Come be, where my love flows free,
Cause darlin, you mean the world to me'
(sympony solo/ as voices re-enter, tempo increases and music swells)
(both)
 Come be, where my love flows free,
(girl)
Come home.
(guy)
Come be with me.
(both)
Without you things just ain't the same.
(music slows down to original tempo)
(both)
Cause' darlin', you mean the world to me.(music slowly fades until only guitar is left/ end)


Okay, so I'm not gonna lie. I'm kinda proud of this one! It's my first country song and I think it's pretty good! Comments? Suggestions?

Hey there again

I can't believe that I've been ignoring my blog for so long! Sorry about that :)
I wrote another song! It currently has no name. It's a Christian song. I think it may be one of my best ones yet. I'm kinda proud! haha
So, tell me, does anyone really read this???? Probably not! haha.
But, whoever does read this, I need your help!
What kind of song should I write next?
                                                All My Love,
                                                               Jordan